May/June Recap

Episode Three: Old Oaths is complete, but is really one half of a two-parter with its follow-up episode. Originally the two were one long episode and may still be merged again in the future, extra polish revision.

Episode Four: New Stakes will complete the Hub story arc next week. Bianca’s introduction was something I’ve changed many times, since the trope of “Airship Captain’s Ex is also an Airship Captain and Probably an Antagonist” lies in well-traversed skies. So, I went with a more wistful and adult feel to their relationship instead, something hidden behind a mask they present to the rest of the world.

There is a new Guidebook Entry: Fixers. The fixers are probably the most steampunk of Skies Unbroken’s steampunk-adjacent setting. They’re a piece of salvage themselves, an idea and a couple characters reclaimed from a non-starter Sci-fi story I concepted and never executed on (See also: The janky Hard Salvage script thing under other fiction). A Fixer hulk and its crew will appear in the next story arc.

Speaking of which: I’ve drawn up and started working under a new plan of attack for Arc 2: Storm Breakers, hence the early ‘June’ recap. I’m not at all happy with the pace of output and flow of the Hub Arc, so I’m changing up my process for the next few months. I’ve been working without a buffer of chapters for a while now, and it is miserable. After Episode Four is complete, I’ll be taking a couple weeks off of regular updates in order to grind out a new buffer of written chapters. A guidebook entry and prologue scene will fill in the gap.

March/April Recap


Episode Two: Rest Days wrapped up, even if I had to drag each chapter across the completion line. The multi-PoV ‘urban’ episodes always present difficulty. Compressing each character’s mini-story into a single chapter, and the whiplash of switching my mindset from one to another, is a challenge. But it’s an important check-in for each of them, especially since everyone’s slated for a full episode of their own further down the line.

Episode Three: Old Oaths is halfway complete as of this week. It’s an order of magnitude easier than its predecessor and contains some long-awaited kick-offs and info-dumps.

Improved consistency is the name of the game this month, namely pulling chapter updates back to Wednesday mornings. March and April were minefields of distraction and momentum breakers. I’d prefer a higher cadence of output, but that’s a stretch goal for now.

The flying isn’t always smooth, but we’re pressing on, all the same.

February Recap

A short recap for a short month.

Episode One of Season Two is complete. Last Call was an odd episode that started out under one concept and evolved into something adjacent but quite different. It was a bit of a momentum breaker in the first couple weeks of the season, a victim of being the opening chapters of both the season, and a longer 4-episode arc in and around Hub. I’m still not sure how I feel about it, honestly.

Episode Two: Rest Days started this week. This one’s a parallel to season one’s Gloria episode, showing a day or two in the life of the rest of the crew. In defiance of jinxing myself, this one feels a lot smoother and should roll out without issue. I settled into a good grove of production over the last couple weeks of February and should keep that rolling through March and into spring.

There’s a new Guidebook entry: Airship Classes. This is something I’ve had in partial form for a while in my internal worldbook. Now it’s cleaned up, expanded, and made official.

January(ish) Recap

January is always a rough patch of the year for me when it comes to writing. So much so that it has become a tradition to slump after the holidays, spend a couple weeks wondering what’s wrong, then realize it’s happening again and make the requisite mental and physical course corrections. Nothing fancy, just more reading and running when weather allows.

Season Two of Skies Unbroken launched on schedule with Episode One: Last Call. The follow-up left a lot to be desired and I’m not satisfied with how the rollout’s gone. This episode is turning out to be far trickier than I imagined. I think I’m past the rough patch, with the rest of the episode shaping up into something useable. The ending is…curious and more of a question than a resolution. The first arc of episodes in season two are generally shorter and add up to a single finale. Or that’s the plan, anyway!

I released a commercial ebook of Season One on Amazon. This is an optional way of supporting the series, available on Kindle for $1.99. There is no new content in this release. You’re not missing out on anything compared to what’s on my website or the free download available on the Season One page.

A commercial ebook implies a couple things by definition. First is cover art. You can see my serviceable amateur efforts on the Season One page. Graphic design is hard. Any emergence of an art budget will replace this cover in short order.

Second is a Goodreads page for Skies Unbroken – Season One. Add, rate, and review as you wish.

At some point, Skies Unbroken picked up a TVTropes page. I discovered this a couple hours ago and its made my day, despite how surreal it is to see. So, a shout-out and a toast to whoever created and filled out that page!

Finally, on February 1st, I was the Writer of the Day over on the r/Fantasy subreddit. Feel free to check out that post and a handful of questions about me and my writing.

Hmm. Now that I’ve laid everything out, I do feel better about how the first month-ish of season two went. I just need to pick up the pace on actual chapters.

Onward, then!

A Bookmark Story

Sophomore year of high school (1999!), a friend loaned me a copy of The Eye of the World. I started reading it during lunch, was confused as hell by its prologue (standard procedure), and needed a bookmark to keep my place because I wasn’t a savage who dog-ears borrowed books. So I took out a sheet of loose-leaf notebook paper, folded it three times to one-eighth the size, and jammed it in there.

This bookmark rode through the entirety of the then-current Wheel of Time series, eight books. By the end it was already slightly stained from rubbing against the ink of 6,000+ paperback pages, a weird, faint gray texture. At some point in those six months or so it picked up a couple scratched up notes relating to easter-eggs in Asheron’s Call and Baldur’s Gate, marking a trifecta of life-long fan associations I’ll stump for to this day.

I still have that improvised bookmark. It’s not in great shape, but it’s a 17-year-old sheet of folded notebook paper, disposable by design, meant for pre-calculus homework. One of the quadrants isn’t even attached to the whole, a loose piece that needs to be carefully folded into the middle so it doesn’t fall out. Honestly, I’m surprised the whole thing hasn’t disintegrated into dust and memories.

I still use that bookmark under certain conditions that evolved over time. I used it for the latter half of the Wheel of Time book as they came out. It took a brief dive into the Sword of Truth series before fleeing halfway through book three. I’m sure it put in appearances elsewhere in the initial years, but it definitely put in work for Otherland, a series that bridged the end of high school and the beginning of college. It might have been the only bookmark I took with me that fall.

Time passed and the bookmark saw more action. It got refolded multiple times to open up fresh sides to be stained by more ink. At some point it became a ‘Thing’. It was now the Epic Fantasy Bookmark. Let other bookmarks put in work for literature classes and sci-fi novels. It started living in The Shadow Rising when not in use, and waits there now. Eventually books had to be worthy of the Bookmark. They must be epic fantasy, Otherland grandfathered in. They must be at least a trilogy (don’t waste my time with stand-alones). They must be good enough in the first 200 pages or so, potential winners, before the Bookmark would deign to descend from its cozy WoT#4 home and grace the challenger with its presence. And it would depart if the book was anything less than great, demoting the novel to one of the other pile of bookmarks I use, improvised or otherwise.

The most recent Bookmark-qualified series is the Magister’s Trilogy by C.S. Friedman. I finished Feast of Souls recently and snap-ordered book two. We’ll see if books two and three can maintain the Bookmark’s increasingly miserly blessing.